自己的高考已经过去很多年,对当年的一切都已经逐渐淡忘了。……但是对于当年的高考作文题目,自己一直记忆犹新……自己高考那一年的作文是一个公德题材的作文,根据雨中的一个场景自拟题目。自己所写的作文内容包括对雨中的场景进行描述、分析这种现象所反映出的问题,以及提出自己对于这个问题的理解及其解决方法这三个方面。
高考的雨作文 高考写雨满分作文
高考的雨作文 高考写雨满分作文
高考的雨作文 高考写雨满分作文
1,对雨中发生的一个场景进行描述,展开自己的作文。
在这篇作文的开头,自己首先简单描述了雨中的那个场景,以此来展开自己的作文。……这部分内容的篇幅不多,但是其中所包含的信息非常关键,是自己提出作文论点的关键。因此自己在具体描述当中对于相关细节的描写非常用心。
2,分析这种现象,说明这种现象所反映出的问题。
3,提出自己对于这个问题的理解,并表达出自己的观点。
在说明问题的前提下,自己在接下来的文章当中提出了自己对于这个问题的理解,同时也表达出自己的看法和观点,并提出了解决这个问题的具体方法。……虽然作文的具体内容已经记不清楚了,但是这篇作文作为自己所写过的最重要的作文,始终在自己的心中留有最深刻的印象。
细雨沁心田
细雨中,公园里游人
极少,鸟儿格外
的欢悦地鸣叫,公园里越发显得静谧。
漫步在微雨洒落的游园里,没有喧
闹,也没有孤寂。有的是盛开的花儿朵
在花瓣上,像晶莹的玉,花儿更让人怜
惜,微雨落在叶上,叶儿更显得勃勃生
机。一切生命都在展示着无与伦比的鲜活
与生命力。
一阵薇风裹着绵绵的香,萦绕在我周
身的脉络里。这香气有那石楠花白色细小
簇拥的花苞裹挟的绵绵的香气,有那金银
花淳朴的香气,还有那熟悉的槐花清心的
香气,香与香的缠绵让人心旷神怡。在这
无人打搅的清新的香醺里,让心灵在鸟语
人的醉美里。此时,内心仿佛有一种飞越
红尘的心声划过心迹。
在微雨中,不必打伞,感受春雨的润
泽,春雨的柔情,春雨的浪漫,春雨的吟
唱,春雨的低语,春雨的惬意。期待着雨
后的景色,天更蓝,树更绿,草更青,花
更艳。
一年好雨知时节,悄然润物细无声。
春风细雨,总是带给天际万物以婀娜多姿
的摇曳,舞出气象万千的明媚春意。春风
细雨虽无语,却饱含着深情。它帮助我解
开世间的浮华喧嚣的镣铐,洗涤着残留在
心中的尘埃与浮躁,启迪我看世间万事万
物的多重视角。享受这份独自亲近自然的
飞的旷达,享受世间的美好。
公园里的郁金香还在盛开,一季绵绵
的春雨,却让的花瓣已飘落一地。
细小的花朵虽然不起眼,却弥漫着浓浓的
香气。虽大,它的香气却远比不上
细小花朵的香气那么浓郁。绿叶虽然看上
去没有花朵娇美,但它却一直顽强的连接雨时拂面的清风?有谁走过春雨滋润的晶
着四季,给天地万物谱写了一曲曲生命蓬
勃的交响曲。万事万物的千万别,才构
成了大千世界多姿多彩的美丽。世间的万
物就在这不完美的交融中,弹奏着四季芳
华的韵律。
所以,常常喜欢一个人静静地漫步在
这春天的微雨里。呼吸清新的空气,与小
缕清悠,安放于心里。寻找灵魂的渡口,
让流年的岁月,如水般清澈,如云般飘
逸。
春风细雨沁芳菲,有谁能够不理会春
莹花朵而不驻足动容?有谁沐浴在这春意
盎然花香四溢的人间四月天里而不踏歌起
舞呢?
a little girl had been shopping with her mom in wal-mart. she must he been 6-years-old, this beautiful red-haired, freckle-faced image of innocence. it was pouring outside. the kind of rain that gushes over the top of rain gutters, so much in a hurry to hit the earth it has no time to flow down the spout. we all stood there under the awning and just inside the door of the wal-mart.
we waited, some patiently, others irritated because nature messed up their hurried day. i am always meerized by rainfall. i got lost in the sound and sight of the heens washing away the dirt and dust of the world. memories of running, splashing so carefree as a child came pouring in as a welcome repri from the worries of my day.the little vo was so sweet as it broke the hypnotic trance we were all caught in: "mom, let's run through the rain," she said.
"what?" mom asked.
"let's run through the rain!" she repeated.
"no, honey. we'll wait until it slows down a bit," mom replied雨中的那个场景涉及到的是一种不讲公德的行为。……通过对这种行为的描写,以及随后的相关分析,自己在作文当中说明了这种现象所反映出来的问题,为自己最终提出自己的观点做好了铺垫。.
this young child waited about another minute and repeated: "mom, let's run through the rain."
"we'll get soaked if we do," mom said.
"no, we won't, mom. that's not what you said this morning," the young girl said as she tugged at her mom's arm.
"this morning? when did i say we could run through the rain and not get wet?"
"don't yoemember? when you were talking to daddy about his cancer, you said, 'if god can get us through this, he can get us through anything!"
the entire crowd stopped dead silent. i swear you couldn't hear anything but the rain. we all stood silently. no one came or left in the next few minutes.
mom paused and thought for a moment about what she would say.
now some would laugh it off and scold her for being silly. some might n ignore what was said. but this was a moment of affirmation in a young child's life. a time when innocent trust can be nurtured so that it will bloom into faith.
"honey, you are absoluy right. let's run through the rain. if god let's us get wet, well maybe we just needed washing," mom said.
then off they ran. we all stood watching, iling and laughing as they darted past the cars and, yes, through the puddles. they got soaked. but they were followed by a few who screamed and laughed like children all the way to their cars.
and yes, i did. i ran. i got wet. i needed washing.
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