看电影:see a film
高考英语作文改错题目大全 高考英语作文改错技巧
高考英语作文改错题目大全 高考英语作文改错技巧
高考英语作文改错题目大全 高考英语作文改错技巧
看比赛:watch a match/
看书:read a book
see a film, watch TV固定搭配
祝你学习进步,更上一层楼! (^__^)
不明白的再问哟,请及时采纳,多谢!
看电影要用动词 see
而看电视,比赛则要用watch
1.They h第七行he改为hinge different ways to school
2.bu bike
3.it takes they about
→It takes them about
Thirty students go to school bu bike中bu变by。it takes they about 10~15 minutes to get to school。it大写It
by bike ,it takes them,get school
Each of them has different way to go to school. Thirty of them go to school by bike and it will take them about 10 to 15 minutes.
括号中是修改后的,主要是一些基本语法,语句还可以进一步润色写得还可以,但有些许语法错误,连词用得不多,句子形式比较单一,自己发挥的地方,语句不够通顺。。
Nowadays, exam has become one of the most important (ways) to judge h多努力吧~~~~ow (do the students knowledge). Who can (get passed) or he a high (score) has a great meaning for his school life or career. All the students try their best to pass. Cheating is one of the ways, and it’s on the rise.
There are two (kinds) of cheating students. The first kind want to experience new things in school. They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities. In this situation, they ignore the importance of knowledge and (be) out of mind in the class. In the end of the semester, (they) choose cheating to pass the exams. (The other kind of students) work hard on their study. They gradually not that cheating can sibly ( them to) succeed in the exam, and they find that who cheats in the exam n has a higher (score) than them. For protecting the fairness between cheaters and non-cheaters, they begin to cheat too. That is because schools pay more attention to the result (than) process.
In my opinion, cheating absoluy should be forbidden all the time. Supervisors must strictly punish the cheaters. At the same time, school should judge the students all-rounds but (only the scores). In this way, I think the fairness will come again in the near future.
第五行 go~goes, but~and
第六句 among~between
第七行 or~and
第八行 relaxing~relaxed, he~hing
第十行 sport~sports
第十一行 sincere~sincerely
一共十个错误
图二
第二行 the~an
第三行 year~years
第四行 crossing~cross, 去掉that
第五行 lights~lit
第六行 careful~carefully
第七行 by~foThe most important I can celebrate the Spring Festival.r
第八行 us~me
第九行 word~words, deeply前面加was, How~What
篇行study改为studying
第二行as后加a
第二行much去掉
第四行go改为goes
第六行both改为either
第七行relaxing改为relaxed
第九行sport改为sports
第十行sincere改为sincerely
When the decision on sending the kids to classes, you should fully concerned about the children's wi→They he different ways to go to schoolll.
如果我没有理解错误,你想表达的意思应该是“在送孩子上学的时候你应充分考虑他们的意愿。”
你所写的句子,主句的主语是the willing of childre,而从句是省略孤you,主从句的主语是不一致的。
The willing of the children should be fully concerned when we make英文中的用词有些是固定搭配使用的。 the decision to send the them to the classes.
When I made the decision to send the kids to the classes, I fully concerned about the will of the children.
1, rything --- soming
3, is --- are
4, when--- which
5, moved--- moving
6, happens --- happened
7,→by bike built 前加 be
8, through--- across
10, forwards--- forward
Since my parents are usually very busy they seldom watch TV or go out and play with me. In fact, I really want to do some interesting things with them such as swimming, shopping and watching movies. Luckily, they all he a holiday today. So they decided to go to the theater with me tonight. I am so happy! I wish we he a good time!
有really就不要加so了
my parents are usually very busy because of work. They rarely watch TV or go outside and play with me. I really want to spend time doing some interesting things with them, such as s第五行among改为betweenwimming, shopping, and watching movies. Today they he a day off becuase it is a holiday and I am so happy that they agreed to go to the movie theather and watch a movie with me. I hope for the best that we can he a great time toger tonight.
Most of us found Mrs. Li, our English teacher, strange on Teachers' Day. She did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She had nr thought a complete surprise would be waiting for her.
All my ctes and I began to design the activity's strategy long before Teachers' Day .The different task was delivered to different cla按行来改啦~sates .
In an effort to give the teacher a surprise, we decorated ry inch in the classroom and spared no effort in doing it .Considering the money was limited,we arranged two parts in this activity :Giving flowers and singing songs .
Entering the classroom ,the teacher got a complete surprise.From the picture,we can see the activity is successful.
I think that the activity can end with flying colors owing to ryone's effort .I can see ryone's passion and patience from the process.No one can deny the fact that the activity can keep our team spirit.
亲:只要紧扣要点,尽量避免语法上的错误批改如下,供参考。,单词拼写错误,那就OK了。祝你进步!
那你可以去补习班的呀。
错的太多了...建议找人帮忙重写一篇..
to 【the】 ground"could",等应为现在进行时吧
.Its name is BoBo. It is a clr pet .He has two arms and two legs前面用“Its"后面干吗用“he”
on the east coast
a population of about
east不能这样用比较级
just not
mountains and riThe most important thing is I can celebrate the Chinese New Year.vers
in last是指什么?
studiedThen we got money given to children as a lunar New Year gift. there
Wenzhou
the air was fresh
the air is very dirty
there are so many trees
life is also happy
is becoming
in the future
will get
dloped
in the eastern coast
like it's name
any seasons
去掉 just like
行:between改成among
they go to school by different ways.by bike.It takes them about 10 to 15 minutes to arrive(到达) school.第三行:people是个集体名词,它本身就是复数,不能加s
第四行:finished their homework
第五行:去掉here
第六行:去掉rubbish前面的the;anywhere改成rywhere
第八行:“老师担心学生在课堂上大声说话”这句写得不好。students talking loudly in class was really troublesome for the teachers.
第九行:good的比较级是better;friendly的比较级才是在前面加more
第十行开头那句,看不明白。clean的比较级是cleaner
点题那句,跑题了。说的是“文明规范”,你却说enjoy learning.
作文最忌讳超字数。。千万要记住。。
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